[WIP] Fanmade Trailer

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Zimplizity
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[WIP] Fanmade Trailer

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Hey all,

I am currently working on a trailer for FTL. I know there is already an offical one but just because it is fun working in AE I'll make a "Fanmade Trailer". I want you guys (would be nice of you :D) to tell me what you don't like and what you think has to be in such a trailer. It would be also cool if you would tell me what makes you want to play FTL.

I already made a first version of the Intro:
[The music is just temporarly]
https://vimeo.com/56286356

Greetz and Merry Christmas
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Zimplizity
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Re: [WIP] Fanmade Trailer

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*UPDATE*

The First Intro Version is uploaded on Vimeo.
Tell me what you think about it :)

https://vimeo.com/56286356
UltraMantis
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Re: [WIP] Fanmade Trailer

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Very good. The only thing that could be improved is if there was some hint about why the ship escapes, and who/what the chasing fleet is. There's the data, and the problem, and then a ship dissapears, but the context isn't explained enough in my opinion. But the beginning is good.
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Zimplizity
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Re: [WIP] Fanmade Trailer

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First of: thanks for your feedback :)

Okay, I'll try to improve that. I will think of how that could be done. Also the text (appearance) should be maybe improved.

EDIT: This is also the first "shot". I am actually planing to put way more stuff in it. Im just still thinking about how. Either a more gameplay or animation trailer.
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Re: [WIP] Fanmade Trailer

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