I enjoy writing and I have been inspired by FTL when thinking of a short story idea. I hope this is the right forum for short stories. Here is part 1 of Fraternity in Ashes. Click the link if you would rather read it on my blog.

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Fraternity of Ashes, Part I
Stubborn bolts and sweat. Too much sweat. Macyruth wiped the wrench for the fourth time with a red rag. The young ensign swayed under the heady tang of fresh blood, grease and fear. The pounding on the hull stimulated another tiny stream of urine she could not stem. As fear darkened her cargo pants Macyruth bit back her tears, stuffed the rag into her breast pocket and worked the bolt once more. The bolt moved. She attacked it again and it moved, again. It was soon free and spinning within her fingers, the bloody, oily fingers allied to her at last. She removed the two remaining bolts and opened the panel. LEDs blinked in desperation and Macyruth did what she could to placate them. As the lights winked from panic-red to tranquil-blue, Macyruth allowed herself a breath. The white data stream flowed once more around her. Beneath the pounding on the hull a tinny voice lit up her grey cell and reminded the young ensign that she was not completely alone.
“Macy?”
Macyruth crawled to the intercom. She gripped the microphone between bloody fingers. “I’m here Era.”
“You alright?” asked the captain. “I’ve got fires raging all around you, here on the display.”
“I’m alright,” Macyruth stammered. “The walls are holding.” Macyruth looked about her cell, the engineering compartment adjacent to the main engine room. Tapping the monitor to the right of the microphone, Macyruth watched the flames lick the bulkheads outside engineering. “Can you put out the fires?”
Macyruth leaned her head against the bulkhead. It should have been cooler than it was. The hull pounded three more times before the captain answered. “No. I can’t. The door controls are fried and I can’t fix them from the bridge.” Macyruth shook her head as the captain took a long breath. “Macy?”
“Yes?”
“They are coming Macy.”
Salt upon her lips, Macyruth gripped clicked the send button on the microphone. “I know,” she said.
“Macy,” said Era. “Macy?”
“Yes?”
“It’s the Mantix, Macy.”
Macyruth nodded. “I know,” she said. The sweat on Macyruth’s forehead began to steam. She lifted her head from the bulkhead and wiped the hair out of her eyes. “Where is Sooq? Is he on the ship?”
“Sooq? I don’t know, Macy.” They both heard the pounding on the hull. It was duller this time. Closer. “The fire won’t have got him, Macy. Rocmen are fireproof.”
“I know,” Macyruth pushed herself onto her knees and sat back on her heels. She focused on the patchwork ceiling. It was a maze of aluminium coveralls and hex-shaped fire-panels. “I just thought he might be able to come to me.”
“I don’t know, Macy.”
A faint smell of dark treacle hung upon the walls. Macyruth watched as the compartment began to steam. She clenched her muscles and her jaw. She trapped the fear inside. “Era?” she said. “Era, I am going to die in here.” Macyruth clicked the send button several times. The click, click of the microphone replaced the pounding on the hull. “Era?” Macyruth’s tongue was gritty with the taste of burning sugar. The walls steamed with a brown glow. “I am going to die in here.”
A twist of corroded gears above her forced Macyruth to look up. One of the hex panels was receding into the gloom of the crawlspace above engineering. Macyruth drew her defender from its holster. The mini-mortar was charged. She swiped the safety release with a coded print from her thumb. As the hex panel disappeared Macyruth pressed the defender into her temple. The weapon’s sensor tasted her skin and screamed a warning. Macyruth stared at the open panel above her.
“Ms Macy?” said a hollow voice from within the crawlspace. “Put away your defender, Ms Macy. Put it away and I will come down.”
The defender protested a moment more before Macyruth thumbed the safety and let the weapon rest on her thighs. She did not blink or lower her head. The panel opening framed a silica head, thin with opal flakes of shale. The rocman dropped into the room, landing with a blunt thud upon the deck. Shale cascaded to the deck in a flurry of shaped edges. Sooq smiled at the young ensign on her knees before him. Macyruth lowered her gaze from the panel and acknowledged the rocman with a nod.
“Ms Macy,” said Sooq. “We must go now.”
Macyruth took the rocman’s hand and pulled herself to her feet.
“Era is dead,” she said, holstering her defender.
“Yes,” Sooq said. “And the mantix have boarded The Redtail.”
“And the fires are still burning.”
Sooq nodded. “They might be our only defence for the moment Ms Macy. We should not try to put them out. Not just yet.”
“That might be fine for you, Sooq, but I will burn up in here.”
Sooq looked around the compartment. We might be able to get you inside the reactor nacelle. It will protect you. The mantix will not find you there.”
Macyruth shook her head. “If they get the engine online then I will be fried inside the reactor. No, it is better to die out here.”
“Ms Macy,” Sooq said. “The mantix will not get The Redtail’s engines online. No one will. When their ship leaves The Redtail will be stranded.”
“Then what is the point, Sooq?”
“The point is to not to die at the pincers of the mantix.”
“Then kill me now, Sooq,” Macyruth drew the defender and thumbed it into action. “Or let me do it,” she said. The steam turned to smoke as the walls began to evaporate. “Kill me Sooq, or let me do it.” Macyruth held the defender to her chest. “Let me do it, Sooq.”
“No Ms Macy. Not yet. Not while we have a chance.”
“A chance?” Macyruth stared at the rocman. “You said we were as good as stranded here, with or without the mantix.”
“The mantix have a ship Ms Macy.”
To be continued...