The Last Night, with notes on adventure

[Targetstar]

The Last Night

Captain’s Journal, March 1, 5345, Jaraoth, password: The Last Night
We got out new ship thanks to the feds, but on hard terms… I named her The Last Night, for I am hoping this will be my last night in the dark skis

Captain’s Journal, March 3, 5345, Jaraoth, password: Star Wars
Ugh, never sure if this was the right decision… I was a great pirate, I smuggled, I slaved, and even blew up some dam station for fun, but this war had come and my children. The federation said if I deliver this holo data to them at the HQ, all my debts and crimes will be wiped clean… I only wish at the end of this. My son Markus lives as he wants.

Captain’s Journal, March 6, 5345, Jaraoth, password: Help
Ha, those dam debater mantis still want a piece of me, but I gutted them, and hey we even got a captive named Maria, she is an engi so we will finally have some one fly the plane.

Captain’s Journal, March 9, 5345, Jaraoth, password: Hard Time
Dam slavers, those rock are hard as hell, Markus busted an organ, he will live he is tuff, but dam, I should train him better. Next time we will have a fun time, just him and me.

Captain’s Journal, March 13, 5345, Jaraoth, password: Need more password
HAHAHA, best father son moment ever, Markus and I beamed into a rebel smuggler’s ship and beat the living snot out of everyone. O we even found some engi stuck in the ceiling… his name is Tech. Ironic isn’t it.

Captain’s Journal, March 15, 5345, Jaraoth, password: New World
We got to the end of the sector, but the dam slugs have slimed on there floor, which made me trip. Now I'm in the medic until one of my legs heal… I offer to just cut it off, I have 5 more anyways.

Captain’s Journal, March 17, 5345, Jaraoth, password: Fuck
Haza, we aren’t goanna be stranded here like total losers, we were running out of fuel until luckily, a rock ship came by to kill us. The battle was hard as nails… me and Markus beamed back and forth healing and killing, we took heavy damage, but Maria says it can be fixed, o and we got a new crew member, he’s a rock man named Kirby… which is ironic.

Captain’s Journal, March 20, 5345, Jaraoth, and password: Engi are good hackers.
Ahh, we are just waiting for the FTL to charge up, engi hacked some idiots’ drones to help it, now they shower us with gifts, o, we also helped out some transport ship, and one of them, a rockman, decided to join us, his name is Nemo? I am starting to get confuse on which one is worse.
Captain’s Journal, March 24, 5345, Jaraoth, password: full boarding crew
GO GO rock man ><, apparently, the rockman don’t like fixing stuff either, so we decided for the 2 rockman to join out boarding. It was a blast, though I don’t think Kirby liked it when I used him as a “rockman” shield. We are at the end of the sector, savaging these pirate ships, you know, I think Markus is getting the hang of fighting.

Captain’s Journal, March 25, 5345, Jaraoth, password: A good name
Well, most interesting jump ever, we jumped into the new sector, to be greeted by Rebels, which were easy to deal with, but the federation cruiser, was hiding… apparently they are a muss, but we had to escort them to some place… (I think it’s a trap), but one of there engineers, Will a rockman joined us… he says he doesn’t like fighting. I’m thinking only the funny one do.

Captain’s Journal, March 29, 5345, Jaraoth, password: Shield thank you
Well… I learned something to day. Not everyone needs to fire a gun to kill an auto ship. We got stuck in an asteroid field, and the auto ship there tried to follow us… Marie did a great job dodging the asteroid, while the auto ship was crushed almost instantly… I laughed my head off… until one of them broke threw and shook the ship… we ran shortly after.

Captain’s Journal, April 2, 5345, Jaraoth, and password: I hate April fools day
Ok the cruiser we were escorting got to its location, it was a secret base hidden at the edge of a nebula. Unfortunately it was April fool day… so I killed a few of them. We ran into the nebula, but found tons of ruined ships in the ion field, can’t wait till the FTL drive works again

Captain’s Journal, April 4, 5345, Jaraoth, password: beacon should not be near the sun
Well, suns hurt… a lot, I can’t tell you the number of times I told Maria to shut up about the fire, what am I, an engi…. Ugh, luckily she jumped on time to get out of it.

Captain’s Journal, April 7, 5345, Jaraoth, password: Woops
Well, we meet another slaver… ahh the good old times, I remember when I jumped on there ship to capture them, not ask them like a douche, so we jumped in them and killed the whole lot… unfortunately, the slaves got shot up as well >.>

Captain’s Journal, April 11, 5345, Jaraoth, password: New Tactic
So yea… I hate medic bays… well on there ship at least. But Markus was smart, and made a plan. Since the Rock was tuff, we decided, while the rockman distract the crew, we go in and blow up there medic bay. It worked… though very risky cause rock people can handle so much; I think Kirby lost like 10 pound.

Captain’s Journal, April 17, 5345, Jaraoth, password: Crap
Well, lesson learned, there is a boat load of Rebels after you when you have something they want… we fought like 3 of them, and one of the time, I was actually able to touch the missile… I wonder what is in this holo data. Well next place we go to is the Zoltons…I hope we get one of them >< we need 1 more person
Captain’s Journal, April 21, 5345, Jaraoth, password: I hate Zoltons.
Ha, never knew Zoltons had shield were you can’t beam into them… it was also the 1st time I realize we never had a single weapon… even this stupid heal bomb sucks. At least we got an Ion Blast II now, but now we really need a Gunner.

Captain’s Journal, April 23, 5345, Jaraoth, password: Sad Zoltons
Well, end of sector… I swear, the farther we get, the harder it gets… I wonder how Markus is doing, and I really wonder how these Zoltons debris…. Ooo a dead body floating… is doing here.

Captain’s Journal, April 25, 5345, Jaraoth, password: They won’t hurt us she said.
Ahh, well never ever, trust a Zoltons, we had a Zoltons pose as a scientist, then BAM, they open fired on us, but luckily, our new Ion Blast popped there super shield with ease, and we killed those wimpy Zoltons. Well Kirby and Nemo did at least.

Captain’s Journal, April 27, 5345, Jaraoth, password: Ma Fan?
Hmm, I don’t know what he did, but he’s a pirate… I don’t trust him. We board a Zoltons ship, and found him or her? In the store room, ill accept him now. But I don’t like his face… or glow? dam Zoltons are confusing I wonder how they mate?

Captain’s Journal, April 28, 5345, Jaraoth, password: HOW MANY ARE THERE
Well. I found the value of having maximum security doors… a group of 6? Or so Humans beamed into our ship… the engi were useless, Ma Fan was to squishy, so we had a lot of trouble with them bunch… lesson… always have good doors.

Captain’s Journal, April 31, 5345, Jaraoth, password: Ion rule, and Rockman is schooled
Well, Ion beats everything >.> Ma Fan, shot a defensive drone at it, and we were praise more than when Maria had back then ><, but fun aside, Nemo had a near accident. A Spike from a Mantis almost killed him, and he almost died… I’m happy Markus is ok at least.

Captain’s Journal, May 1, 5345, Jaraoth, password: Good to be Home
Ahh, I haven’t been back at our home system in a while, I even had a greeting party. Dam I need to work out more ><, I decided for Nemo and Kirby to go under stress test to make them better fighters. We will need it in here.

Captain’s Journal, May 4, 5345, Jaraoth, password: I SEE EVERYTHING
Well, Nemo and Kirby gotten a lot better at fighting… even I have trouble, and there was a Rebel smuggler, we killed him easily with our new found skill. And we even got some data… the most interesting thing was, I found the password for the holo data… it was apparently the blueprint for a giant ship… which I found highly unlikely that this ship is even made, the designers forgot to add doors to the weapon room. Maybe it’s encrypted?

Captain’s Journal, May 7, 5345, Jaraoth, password: Ion + Asteroid = Win
Remember how I said I laughed when asteroid killed the auto ship… well it did it again ><,, except this time, Ma Fun, shot prickly to take down its shield, and the asteroid did the rest… hmm, time flies thinking back now… need to work on holo data.

Captain’s Journal, May 9, 5345, Jaraoth, password: This is it
This is it. This is it. We are heading to the Federation HQ, I hope we can meet them already so we can leave and get these dam rebels off of me.

Captain’s Journal, May 10, 5345, Jaraoth, password: Secret Revealed
Well apparently, I was right >.>, the ship was alive, and they guys are retarded… well mostly the federation. The are mustering there last forces to take out there mother ship, and they said we will get a big reward, if we help them out, cause we know the most about it… well I think.

Captain’s Journal, May 12, 5345, Jaraoth, password: OMG it’s huge, and crap.
Well. Hot dignity dam… I want that ship. It was huge, but dam. When the fed fleet were fighting the small peps, The Last Night, was against that mother ship. We followed the plan, we disable weapon 1st, then we jump in, and kill the rest, Shield 1st, then Cloak. It worked like a charm… with everyone dead, it seemed fine, all we had to do was blow it up… unfortunately that was a problem. We only had 2 Ion Blast II, and no offensive except the Boarding Drone, luckily the boarding drone hit its mark, and killed the last officer, and blew it up… but the most bizarre thing happen. As soon as we blew it up, it detached its wing, and flew off… with out a crew… this is all messed up.

Captain’s Journal, May 13, 5345, Jaraoth, password: I hate Drones, and engi
Well, when we chased after it, Markus, Nemo, Kirby, and I, had to disable its weapon again, but we saw no crew, but we never realize it was controlled by a AI, we all hurried to the drone control room, and destroyed most of the ship along with us. And sent the bearding drone to finish it off, but when the boarding drone, self destructed, the Ship did it again. It Detached its wing, and jumped off… but with out its AI core…. Something is fishy here.

“Hurry, come on we can’t let it escape” yelled Jaraoth.
“We can’t, the ship is under heavy damage, its best to go in after we refuel at a station!” Yelled Maria.
“It’s no use.” Said Tech, “all the refueling stations are gone by now, our only option is to pursuer.”
“Right then lets go” said Markus
“Let’s crush this ship,” said Nemo
“Let eat this ship up,” said Kirby
“Alright I’m going, prepare you.” Said Maria.

The ship moved into its position along the beacon, dodging the debris, and laser that still fought along the federation and rebel lines. The world turned blue and white around them as the FTL drive kicked in, and with a sudden shock, they stopped. The mother ship looked angry, it had electricity coming out of its side, and it glowed green.
“Come on Maria, send us in!” yelled Jaraoth
“We can’t it has a Zoltons shield, ill send you in as soon as it down,” Yelled Maria

The ship shock, and rumbled every time a missile hit, or as it sailed by, but the green was fading, and it was turning black. The Green light was on in the crew teleported room, and it signed. In 3, 2, 1, and they beamed in. The mother ship was a wreak, electrical spark going everywhere, and fire going about. Jaraoth laughed a little as Kirby took out the fire, to make sure not to kill them self on accident. Jaraoth order everyone to tear the ship apart, and look for the real AI core. The ship heaved and hoe, as it was torn, bit by bit, but then a giant shock shocked the entire ship.

“You have to get out of there, the ship hull is not goanna hold, I’m sending the boarding drone!” Yelled Maria
“Ok everyone, into the open room, we beam together, once the boarding drone landed.” Commanded Jaraoth, after waiting a while with no shock of the drone, “were the boarding drone?”
“Umm bad news, it’s stuck in the weapon slots, it can’t shot anything, so it’s useless, and we can’t move it either.” Said Maria, “What do we do?”
“Beam everyone back, I’m staying, I know what I should do,” stated Jaraoth calmly.
“Wait, but dad-,” Markus’s words were cut off by the beaming of there bodies back to the ship.
I know what I should do, thought Jaraoth, the core is in the center of the ship, I know it, fire had spread again, and is starting to consume the ship, bodies of the crew littered the floor, and when he open the hatch, he saw, a blue ball, floating, and it just looked at him.
“Tonight is my last night Markus,” Jaraoth said to himself, “but it is also yours, I hope this is your last night as well, and your mornings are endless as the universe.”
Jaraoth threw the grenade into the room, and sat down on the captain chair, and everything around him was warm like a spring sun, and the darkness, was no longer there.

Captain’s Journal, Jan 1, 5360, Markus, password: Seriously dad.
Ha, after 5 years, and a little help from Tech. I finally crashed every single one of your passwords… Why the hell do you change it every day? Ugh, I miss you, everything is fine here, but I miss you, I hope, I will see you some day, again, and kicking some ass.

THE END

--- Notes --

Mantis Type B, Story
Sector 1
-Asteroid Belt, Gain Metal
-Fuel Store, reject, nothing happen
-Fight, Mantis Trap, Boarding Party, gain a Engi named Maria
-Fight, vs. Auto ship, runs Stalemate
-Event, Gain Anti-Personal ship
-Fight, Slave Rock, Border party, gain Stealth Aug, and heavy injures
-Fight (Nebula), Black-market Fed, Boarding party, Fire from Missile
-Fight (Nebula), Auto, run using Defense Drone
-Brief rest, to recover damage
-Fight, Smuggler rebel, Boarding Vic, Gain another Engi named Tech
-Fight, Slug, Boarding Vic, near death
-End of Sector 1, head to civilian
Sector 2
-Low, on fuel
-Fight, Slaver, long fight, cost a lot of hull, gain a rockman named Kirby
-Fight, Zoltons, runs
-Fight, Fed, boarding successful, aid civilian, gain Rockman named Nemo
-Store, thankful recovery
-Event, Engi repair targeting on drone
-Fight, Pirate, aid civilian, Boarding successful
-Store, nothing
-Fight, Rebel, Rockman join boarding, quick fun
-Asteroid, find abandon ship
-End of Sector 2, head to Rebel
Sector 3
-Fight, Rebel, aid Fed, add quest, new rockman, named Will, a lot of boarding drones ><
-Fight, Auto scout, run
-Store, nothing
-Store, nothing
-Asteroid Field, Auto scout, victory threw asteroid
-Fight, Rebel, Boarding successful
-Find Station for quest, was hidden base, and helped
-Nebula, a lot of dead space ships
-End of Sector, Pirate next
Sector 4
-Solar Sun, Invaded, deal with quickly, jump before fire hits
-Fight, Rock, Boarding successful, beam hurts
-Asteroid Field, find a Pirate ship in it
-Fight, Slaver, sees Heavy Beam and Ion, blow up, using rocks, slave’s dies
-Stations, leave alone
-Asteroid, Aid pirate from rocks
-Fight, Pirate rocks, disable our engine, use a Trap to disable medic
-Store, gets a Pike Beam
-Fight, use Trap technique
-Fight; engage Rebels, runs (X3), last time doge missiles
-End of Sector 3, Heads to Zoltons home world
Sector 5
-heal up,
-Store, buys Heal Bomb
-encounter Zoltons, can't break breach
-Fight, slug, use Trap
-Buys Ion Blast II,
-Stumble upon wreckage of Zoltons ships
-End of Sector 4, head to Zoltons sector
Sector 6
-meet Zoltons ship, Ion deals shield easy
-Fight, Zoltons scientist open fire
-low on fuel
-Fight, Fed Boomer, Ion storm, nebula, secure fuel quick battle
-Fight, Auto scout, sends in Boarding Drone... very slow
-Fight, Zoltons bounty, boarding successful
-Fight, Zoltons bounty, finds a Zoon prisoner named Ma Fan?
-Invaded, large group of humans, upgrades doors
-Fight, Rebel ambush, rush in, rocks almost dies, use Trap
-Event, aid disable torrent via ION
-Fight, Engage Rebel Fleet, Boarding, and invade
-End of Sector 7, Mantis Home world
Sector 7
-Fight Mantis, hard fighters
-Shop, shield ague
-Engi, gave fuel
-Fight, Rebel Smuggler, hard fight, get info on map
-Fight, Auto, sneak, gain resource
-Fight, Mantis pirate, aid civilian, help put to space center
-Fight, Auto, Asteroid field, use Borders, and Ion, and asteroid, to KO it
-Fight, Mantis Boomer, Bordering Successful, near miss with Missile
-Fight, Rebel, Engage, runs awry
Sector 8
-let’s do this
-Bought 2nd Ion Blaster II
-Fight Rebel, aid civilian, gain credits,
-1st fight with Flag ship, disable weapons, then cloak, and use Boarding to kill shields, killed entire crew
... Realize I don't have an offensive weapon and really on Boarding drone to finish off >.>
-2nd fight, disable everything, suffer great damage
-3rd, OMG ITS A LASER, destroys enemy, drone gets stuck on weapon slot (stupid), Jaraoth dies to kill the ship

Character
Jaraoth, (Captain) deceased
Markus, (Co Captain)
Marie, (Pilot)
Tech, (Shield)
Kirby, (warier)
Nemo, (Warier)
Will, (Engine)
Ma Fan, (Weapon)

Score: 3846, Normal

[Targetstar]

This is my 1st one, so tell me if i need to edit anything, for when i do my 2nd one. Yelling is approved... just make sure it counts

[Aang2001]

You've got a good story and a nice background, but it might be a good idea to install a spell checker into your browser, and maybe use a bit more wider punctuation to help it make sense, but it is much better than anything I could come up with without a few hours.

[EDIT:Don't take me as a newb due to my post count, I just don't post, I lurk in the shadows.]

[embair]

Moral of the story: No matter how paranoid you are, some bastard can always hack you and leak your personal stuff to the internet.

Fun story, made me smile a couple of times. One thing: It's Zoltan, not Zolton