Cool mod, though some grammar and style issues are present.
Everyone is chating while sitting down on their seats. As you stand up, silents lies down.
Should be chatting, and I think silence, though it's still an odd sentence.
Your First Officer explains, that he will be married to the beatifull Ships - Counselor.
Beautiful, and Ships - Counselor is just weird, where does that come from? I think it should just be ship's counselor.
Chose your preparings!
I think you mean choose? After looking it up, seems preparings is a word (or maybe not? wiktionary any good?)(despite a red underline in chrome), but I have no idea how one would use it..
There is probably more, I just played for a little bit.
You should rename misc.xml.append to misc.xml.rawappend, otherwise slipstream forces certain xml changes and breaks some stuff (cosmetic). Texts that depend on changing variables lose some spaces, like crew health when hovering over them, some store stuff, events that fix your hull etc.
And if anyone's bothered, standard CE vanilla crew portraits patch functions OK with this.