I hoped this would get some more attention, but seeing that no one else bothered to reply... I have to say, that this is one of the best Normandies I've seen here yet. And I agree with Taxi -- the hull image is very nice, and pretty detailed. Gibs are nice too, at least way better than what I usually come up with

It's good to see someone who actually gives a damn about how the ship looks
Interesting choice with having Cloak 2 in starting loadout... Though I guess it makes sense, given that the Normandy is a stealth frigate. However, IMHO you should definitely cut some stuff down -- it's pretty damn strong as it stands now. As Taxi mentioned, weaker weapon loadout would be reasonable, and you could remove either the shielding or artillery system from the starting loadout, so that the player has to buy them (makes sense given the ship ugrades from ME2).
Removing/downgrading the shielding system would force the player to make strategic use of their cloak -- though admittedly, there's little skill involved in that... Either way, these are just my thoughts
