"Targeting Jammer - Attempts to
scrambles* the enemy weapon targeting." - scramble
"Your Zoltan crew member seems a little sad .... It misses ... the space station it
has lived*
in** a few years ago." - 1) "lived" (remove has), or "was living"; 2) I would use "on", but this is a minor quibble.
"The Zoltan
enquirers on* how you feel.
Im** always happy ...." - 1) "asks how you feel"; 2) I'm
"
Eh* captain? I have to explain something.
It's** news comes as a surprise: Your Mantis has been secretly mating with
on*** of
it's**** kind in the last sector." - 1) add comma after "Eh"; 2) Its; 3) one; 4) its; actually, I think "with one of its kind" may be redundant, unless you think rishathra is a common practice. (But with a Mantis?!

) So, I propose: "your Mantis was secretly mating in the last sector." (This was quite a feat, as I only had one on board, and I don't remember making any stops.

)
Next: "I
know* you would understand.... Your
crewmen** is happy to not have to hide
it's*** offspring anymore and promises the newborn will be no burden and
fight**** for you just as
loyal***** as
it's****** parent." - 1) knew; 2) crewman (do we think this term applies to females as well? Should it be "Your crewwoman" Or maybe just use "She" instead?); 3) its; 4) will fight; 5) loyally; 6) its. [And holy shit, I just got a new Mantis!

]
"Your Mantis is busy sharpening it's* claw**." - 1) its; 2) claws (I think it should be plural, unless you think Mantises have just one claw?)
I'm so pissed! In sector 4? I still had the starting Zoltan B weapons (Ion Burst II and Pernach Beam), but having two Mantises, I bought a teleporter. Then I was in an asteroid field boarding a station?, and wasn't paying enough attention to how the ion weapon (drone?) took my shields down, and the missile launcher and missile? drone were shredding my hull. The enemy didn't have a medbay, but did have blast doors, so my Mantises were stuck fighting in one room. On my ship I was sending my repair crew, Engi & human, hither and yon to repair the Medbay, then I had a fire, but my door control was down, so I sent the Engi there, then my teleporter got taken out, so I sent both to repair that, as my Mantises were getting low health warnings. I finally got the teleporter repaired and pulled the Mantises back to heal when I got blown up. SHITFUCKSONOFAMOTHERFUCKINGBITCH!!!
