Bottom line: Don't mess with the Rebel fleet.

I'm not seeing that text anywhere. Was it one of the starting tips?The Captain wrote:"Targeting Jammer - Attempts to scrambles* the enemy weapon targeting." - scramble
How about, "...it had lived on..."?The Captain wrote: "Your Zoltan crew member seems a little sad .... It misses ... the space station it has lived* in** a few years ago." - 1) "lived" (remove has), or "was living"; 2) I would use "on", but this is a minor quibble.
They have multiple claws, but how many can be sharpened at once?The Captain wrote: Next: "I know* you would understand.... Your crewmen** is happy to not have to hide it's*** offspring anymore and promises the newborn will be no burden and fight**** for you just as loyal***** as it's****** parent." - 1) knew; 2) crewman (do we think this term applies to females as well? Should it be "Your crewwoman" Or maybe just use "She" instead?); 3) its; 4) will fight; 5) loyally; 6) its. [And holy shit, I just got a new Mantis!]
"Your Mantis is busy sharpening it's* claw**." - 1) its; 2) claws (I think it should be plural, unless you think Mantises have just one claw?)
Hmmm... I like this concept but I think I'd tweak it a little and have the clone lose some or all skills. That can be explained as an "older sample" or that the skills were "muscle memory" based, which the clone will have to relearn.ikeelyou300 wrote:I like the new Clone Lab Augment. I think it's an interesting idea, it's a little bit more useful than the AI Avatar generator. I know it only allows you to clone "carbon based" species, but would it be possible to make an augment that allows you to "clone" your crew members whenever they die in an event? Basically my thought was maybe if you have the Clone Lab and a giant-alien spider kills one of your crew and you have the augment could you choose a blue option and "clone" your dead crew mate (maybe just using stored DNA samples)? Technically they just won't die at all, but it would seem like an exact clone with all their skills, name, etc... was created. (Though I guess you won't actually get to see who died hmm...) I think this would make the clone lab even more useful and distinguish it from the AI Avatar Generator a lot more. It would certainly be useful just for those events where you're afraid to risk your crew or even for a sole survivor challenge run. Also good for people who get really attached to their crew, like me.
On the other hand, I was also thinking maybe there should be some more events where your crew can die randomly, but they should die trying to save the rest of your crew and/or doing something heroic... Not becoming breakfast for an alien spider.
Hmmm, I didn't make note of that. Possibly it was just the augment description (Slug A has it now).KJ4VOV wrote:I'm not seeing that text anywhere. Was it one of the starting tips?The Captain wrote:"Targeting Jammer - Attempts to scrambles* the enemy weapon targeting." - scramble
Since it was the recent past, I think "lived on" or "was living on" fits better.How about, "...it had lived on..."?The Captain wrote: "Your Zoltan crew member seems a little sad .... It misses ... the space station it has lived* in** a few years ago." - 1) "lived" (remove has), or "was living"; 2) I would use "on", but this is a minor quibble.
Well, then it should have said "sharpening a claw."They have multiple claws, but how many can be sharpened at once?The Captain wrote: Next: "I know* you would understand.... Your crewmen** is happy to not have to hide it's*** offspring anymore and promises the newborn will be no burden and fight**** for you just as loyal***** as it's****** parent." - 1) knew; 2) crewman (do we think this term applies to females as well? Should it be "Your crewwoman" Or maybe just use "She" instead?); 3) its; 4) will fight; 5) loyally; 6) its. [And holy shit, I just got a new Mantis!]
"Your Mantis is busy sharpening it's* claw**." - 1) its; 2) claws (I think it should be plural, unless you think Mantises have just one claw?)![]()
I am wondering why "your" is used with Mantis - I don't recall seeing it with other species chats.As to gender and "crewmen" or "crewman", this has been a bone of contention with modern navies ever since women started serving. Most have decided to keep the masculine terminology when talking about enlisted ranks or crew. In any case though, we still don't know for certain the gender of this particular Mantis. Maybe, like seahorses, the males hatch the young? Maybe Mantis don't have sexes at all and can act as either, as required? And the text never actually says the Mantis laid the egg, just that the newborn has already hatched. How about just changing "crewmen" up there (which should have been the singular anyway) to "Mantis"? "Your Mantis is happy..."
Ahem...The Captain wrote:I am wondering why "your" is used with Mantis - I don't recall seeing it with other species chats.The Captain wrote: "Your Zoltan crew member seems a little sad .... It misses ... the space station it has lived* in** a few years ago." - 1) "lived" (remove has), or "was living"; 2) I would use "on", but this is a minor quibble.